Mmm. Storyline advancing... interaction... new character... this chapter has everything I love

Troubles brewing   

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Reversal of Fate 1Jersey Shore, PA  
The door to the rundown house creaked open slowly. Dean peered around the edge of the door, gun at the ready. Once he decided the coast was clear he motioned for his brother to follow. Sam slipped in and glanced over to Dean, arching his eyebrows. "So, you're sure that this was the last house the vic was seen in?" he whispered.  
"Yeah, of course I am, Sammy!" Dean snapped. "I know how to do my damn job. Friends had him out here on a dare. House has been abandoned for about 15 years. Last owners moved out real fast when they lost their father. Craig here is lucky victim number three to disappear in the house this month."
"So, possible angry spirit?" Sam stepped over fallen chairs in the entryway. "Did their story make it sound like the father died ugly?"
"Not sure yet, couldn't get a clear story from the family. They didn't seem to take kindly to any questions about him, so there's a good chance something happened there that no one wants to rememb

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Reversal of Fate 2Head swimming, Sam moaned as he slowly sat up. "What the hell..." He looked up at his surroundings, unable to remember what he'd been doing before he'd been knocked out. A dark column of wood rose above his head, leaning against the immense cliff he was lying next to, stretching up into the darkness above. Enormous, brown, monolithic structures stretched away in the other direction. A massive light was shining where Sam was standing, casting a huge pool of light around him. He could hear excited shouting from behind the wood column to the left, and slowly turned that direction, wincing at the pain that shot through his head at the movement. He saw two men running toward him from the dark and tensed as they got closer.
"You said it works on everybody!" Snapped the younger of the two. He had short brown hair and eyes that were so dark they were almost black.
"It's never failed before, there must be something wrong with that one. Something different." Hissed the older man, long grey hair

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Reversal of Fate 4Sam pulled himself to his feet on the pillow, holding his arms out for balance as he stood. Tenanye stood up next to him with far better balance. She was absolutely tiny, even compared to Sam. And he wasn't about to win any height contests today. She came up to the middle of his chest, slender body looking fragile even compared to others at the same size. She looked so delicate a strong gust of wind might blow her away. Long black hair ran straight down her back, and her eyes shone the same dark color as Warren's. From what he could tell, she couldn't have been any older than early twenties. She glanced back at him with a huge grin and a wink, and bounced carelessly down the pillow, landing gracefully on her feet. Sam on the other hand tumbled back on his ass when she shook the pillow with her bouncing.
"Well, what are you waiting for?" She called up to him, quietly laughing at his situation.
Rolling his eyes, Sam pulled himself back to his feet, and decided to just use the pillow as a




The story takes place after Season 6 Episode 14 Mannequin 3: The Reckoning

Original working title: Escape


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